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Wednesday 5 July 2017

The Monster that lost his Fidget Spinner

For our library at school our class got into groups.And we had to write books. I was in a group with Isla Reagan and Brody.

4 comments:

  1. Hey Eva, I really like your slideshow/movie about "The Monster who lost his fidget spinner." I think that this story is funny and interesting at the same time. Maybe next time you should do a part 2. This reminds of when I got my first fidget spinner. I have also got a question, Do you have a fidget spinner? If you want to see my learning blog here it is http://wpsshabeeraa.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Hi Ava My name is Izzy and I go to Waikowhai Primary School,
    I really like your story and found it very interesting, maybe next time you should read over your story to see if it makes sense. Have you got a fidget spinner? Your story reminds me of when I went into a huge fidget spinner store and my brother got 5 fidget spinners!
    If you want to check out out my learning here is my blog: http://wpsisabeller.blogspot.co.nz/
    Blog you later
    Izzy

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  3. Hi there, my name is Saskia and I am a student in Room 9 at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like how your story was original and funny. My favourite part was the fart guns and marshmallows. I admit, if I had been there, I would have eaten all the marshmallows. I think you could work on your grammar a bit more so I can understand what you have to say.
    If you want to follow my learn go to my blog at http://wpssaskiac.blogspot.co.nz/
    Blog ya later.

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